This is reminding me of the full-illustration previs stuff I've seen from the pre digital times. You got it to work. I"m still wondering how you got the flare look on the top middle light. Maybe just the color dodge effect? I don't know. Pretty comprehensive pic, though. Hey, I'm just realizing, you CAN have a workable image without a bright red spot somewhere. Looks good.
"...In short, all I'm saying is, if we can cut corners here, remove a little redundancies there, raise the safe limits a bit, we can improve engine power and increase craft acceleration by over 17%, and skim some extra credits at the same time..."